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Lookin' for proofreaders

Posted by MetalSlayer69 - 2 weeks ago


The script for Kerfuffle Crescendo (my feature-length comedy cartoon, if you wanna skip the backstory) is incredibly close to complete, potentially I'll have the first draft complete this month. I'm looking for a few people who are willing to read the thing over and tell me if any of the jokes don't make sense to them. The script will be around ~115 pages (every time I bring this up publicly it gets shorter lol).


I only need a few people for this, people with little experience with comedy will probably be rejected.

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I'm on. But first, does it contain mature content?

no you're not and yes it does

@MetalSlayer69 okay, maybe next time.

hm... looks like you're aiming for some audience with a little bit higher iq, kinda like big bang theory or something. Some subjects like "shadow government", "synthetic", "conjurer/fortune teller", most of the people won't understand. From the experience i had with public mostly of the people don't get the "smarter jokes" nor the deeper meanings you want to express. Mostly of the people just get the simpler things, well at least here in brazil where people have the average iq of 83 or something

are you hiring any Voice actors?

I'll figure that out later

I still have your poker script

Poker cartoon got cancelled because the script got absorbed into Kerfuffle Crescendo