MetalSlayer69's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Animal Fact: Lobsters]

Hi I'm Johnny Lobsville and welcome to Jackass

[Sorry I said the N word Man]

breathtaking

[Jans Island Secret]

plott tw*ist!?!?! remind's me of that thyme i g0t my BALLS twisteD in thattt japanese femdom p*orno vid.

[The Do's and Don'ts of Summer Fun]

noice

[Jan - tis what it tis']

another thrilling chapter in Jan's epic saga

[DIRTY LAUNDRY]

straight banger as always mister 5ive

[dog park]

disorientating to look at with minimal animation

[NoCaps And The Clones]

pretty entertaining, though there are some flaws. Here are my recommendations for improving:

- more diverse sound effects
that dinging sound effect is overplayed and becomes grating

- less tweening
there's a lot of animation where things like arms are just tweened around, would look better if animated frame-by-frame

- better illustrations
your illustration quality is holding back the animation quite a lot. especially how flat everything this, there's nothing wrong with using flat shapes as a stylistic choice, but you really should know how to move volumes in space, there's a lot of beginner art resources that go over this, Peter Han's Dynamic Sketching is one I've seen, and I just checked and it's all on Youtube, probably not legally lol https://youtu.be/f312sDwg770?list=PLqR-aNpyEIVd91GCwsyOS3oRn6eoRhyio

also, the way the clone's heads just disappear when they get shot looks pretty bad, a couple of frames of the head disintegrating would fix that.

Now's the part of the review where I comment on the stuff you did well

The story was easy to follow even without dialogue

The shot composition (as well as how each shot leads into the next) was really well done

[The BLAM-O! Brothers]

the writing's funny, but that monotone way every line is delivered gets grating really fast, maybe it would've been better if it was reserved to only one character. Also not a fan of such restrained animation

MaxJohnsonINK responds:

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