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disorientating to look at with minimal animation

pretty entertaining, though there are some flaws. Here are my recommendations for improving:

- more diverse sound effects
that dinging sound effect is overplayed and becomes grating

- less tweening
there's a lot of animation where things like arms are just tweened around, would look better if animated frame-by-frame

- better illustrations
your illustration quality is holding back the animation quite a lot. especially how flat everything this, there's nothing wrong with using flat shapes as a stylistic choice, but you really should know how to move volumes in space, there's a lot of beginner art resources that go over this, Peter Han's Dynamic Sketching is one I've seen, and I just checked and it's all on Youtube, probably not legally lol https://youtu.be/f312sDwg770?list=PLqR-aNpyEIVd91GCwsyOS3oRn6eoRhyio

also, the way the clone's heads just disappear when they get shot looks pretty bad, a couple of frames of the head disintegrating would fix that.

Now's the part of the review where I comment on the stuff you did well

The story was easy to follow even without dialogue

The shot composition (as well as how each shot leads into the next) was really well done

the writing's funny, but that monotone way every line is delivered gets grating really fast, maybe it would've been better if it was reserved to only one character. Also not a fan of such restrained animation

MaxJohnsonINK responds:

i have potato in the oven and it stink, been in there for 100 years i think too long toxic fumes sting and erode my skin to a paste it is your fault

looks good, I bet this would be funny if I understood it.

It would be cool if you added english subtitles

ThiagoeAmigos responds:

Oh, okay! I may put subtitles in the future! don't worry :)

damn girl, what that proboscis do?

pretty funny, not familiar with the source material but I like the idea of animating of cobbled-together audio, might try it myself sometime

bminuscartoons responds:

Yeah, it was super fun to make. Really addictive, once you get started. Thanks for watching!

pretty funny, but I've got a few points of criticism

1- watermark is too big

2- you seemed to stop giving a shit towards the end and just ragdolled everything

3- the camerawork sucks

4- Andrew Tate didn't ask Sonic what colour his Bugatti is

5- Fucking shitty dubstep outro fuck

yeah overall 3/5 stars , it's alright and I had a couple laughs

Merry Christmas and God bless America

Amen

sn0wf1ak3z responds:

ngl this entire video was an entire I didn't give a shit moment lol. i was just bored. also SHITTY DUBSTEP OUTRO??? alr imma make my own outro.

good thing I only smoke crack!

Tito 'Dick' Dickman baby!

excellent work Mister Grounds

A man of talent and of good clean sense,
Who speaks with polished air-
On silver floods of his own eloquence
He floats to God knows where

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