MetalSlayer69's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[slumforce EPISODE 1 (part 1)]

there are some pretty simple things you could be doing to improve the animation quality, a lot of movements are happening too fast, what you can do is space out the frames after you've already drawn them, and try out different spacings until you find the one that looks the best.

There are also a lot of movements where you've moved part of the drawing around instead of drawing an entire new pose, which looks bad.

starats responds:

thanks for the feedback. after looking at it again ur actually right. so thank you !

[Zooranians - Drugs PSA]

Drugs are good
they make you do things that you know you not should
and when you do them people think that you're cool

[BUG BOMBED]

I appreciate how this cartoon has bomb-ass animation for bomb-ass animation's sake. You could've drawn half as many frames and it would be just as funny and probably just as well received but you decided to go all out.

[-Broly's Dress-]

C'mon @wadefulp a little frontpage never hurt anybody

[Let's Have A Party]

I wonder what this kid's up to these days

[Clap clap clap]

the animation is all tweens and the joke(?) isn't funny, but whatever this'll pass judgement anyway because BOOBS DUDE HAHA I'M GONNA COOOOOOM!

teemovsall responds:

thanks for being a jerk, I haven't blocked anyone for a long time.

[N'Sane Improv]

the punchline's funny, but the journey it takes to get to it is pretty dull. I don't have an issue with long setups, but comedians will usually make the set-ups themselves funny, look up Norm Macdonald's 'jacques de gatineau' joke, he's got the audience laughing throughout the whole thing even though there's only one real punchline

MrHappyGoLucky responds:

Thank you for the feedback. I'll keep that in mind when making the next one. Plus I love Norm Macdonald stuff too. Greatest comedien of all time in my opinion.

[KISS THE BOYS - BoyKisser Rap]

gay!

[Koishi and Satori Go Shopping]

ah, the shopping cart full of rocks gag, oldest trick in the book

[Flakey The Dinosaur]

this happened to my buddy Eric