MetalSlayer69's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flash animation fight video - 2D Anime action]

could've used some shading or something, there's a few moments in there that just look like an indescipherable mess of lines. Great action tho

Tilacus-X responds:

Thank you very much for the feedback! I will take note of that :3

[G03LM Dies]

too many frames in a lot of places makes the movements sluggish, also no real anticipation in the axe swing makes it lose a lot of its impact, there should always be an anticipation or "wind-up" before the action happens

Chaos-Insurgency responds:

Ok, i will try to make my animations better

[Skin Color]

pretty decent joke, in my opinion the wacky angry face doesn't add anything to the joke though. Could've had the two of them stare at each other blankly and made the white guy start sweating or something. I dunno, there's a lot of better punchlines you could've done here

[A Time To Kill - Rough Animation]

looks pretty cool, I would advise against posting unfinished scenes of bigger movies, all it does is ruin the first impression for the audience. It's like if a book got an early release with two thirds of the pages missing

[Real Madness Collab 2]

this movie is more fucking retarded than an orgy on the short bus

[A]

what a rip-off, no man should ever even attempt to copy the cinematic masterpiece that is B, the characters are watered down, the writing is simultanouesly less subtle yet more unclear, rife with animation errors. Just terrible, this reeks of a sequel nobody asked for

[Green man injects]

creepy

[Stage.fla (LEGO madness)]

really cool, but I feel the pacing was a bit sluggish. those walk cycles feel like they would be better with half the frames

[Heart of Perseverance]

this isn't animation, it's storyboards, and not even good ones at that, everything is symbol drawn and it's obvious there's no construction used

JaxhousQ responds:

Ummm? Wasn't it obvious it wasn't animation? I never at any point called it that... Otherwise, thanks for your feedback! I'll try to do better in the next one!