MetalSlayer69's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Goku Vs. Deku]

animation is good, actual illustration isn't. Learn anatomy and gesture

would rate higher but only 8 seconds worth of video

[Club 1]

I like the creativety with the walks about 33 seconds in

animation quality is pretty good, timing, spacing, squash and stretch are all alright

actual illustration quality could be improved, look into figure drawing

also some audio would be nice

edit: it looks like you're trying to be a successful porn artist, learn figure drawing, I would reccomend Glenn Vilppu's figure drawing course, it's behind a paywall but you can find it for free if you know where to look, use references wherever possible and be creative

[Leisurely Bagtime]

movements have a nice weight to them, violence is visceral and cathartic, and you even managed to suprise me halfway through

FloppyFins responds:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I do my best to keep viewers on their toes

[big ol' mouth]

cool concept, really trippy, fells like I'm watching someone's dream

[Ribbon-Chan and Red-Kun: Poggers]

I cry everytiem

YamiKurutto responds:

;-;

[Madness 7 but it's an old cartoon (SEIZURE WARNING)]

humour and concept are great, though the filter you put over the animation is too intrusive I feel.
Also you could've done better with timing some of the movements. And you could have used squash and stretch more effectively, an example is demon tricky hitting the wall, where the squash isn't as exaggerated as it should be.

BigVinnieBoe responds:

Thank you a lot! You are the first one to ACTUALLY give some critisim lol, I'll try to improve my other works.

[Pizza Girl Ride Along]

frame 1941

[HURRY! HE WENT THAT WAY!]

aniamtion's pretty decent when you actually use it, but too much of this movie is low quality, like no mouth movements on the goblin. Or only 2 alternating frames on the dude breathing heavily

Kill3rman88 responds:

You’re right! I definitely could’ve put in more work for the majority of the dialogue. I do need to practice lip syncing but I figured for the sake of actually finishing a project I would just do what seemed manageable to me. I appreciate you taking the time to watch it though. Thank you.

[Pico & The Masters of Newgrounds]

pretty funny, animation quality inconsistent, vhs scan line effect far too intrusive