MetalSlayer69's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pizza Girl After Hours // Max Hustle]

missing the energy of the first episode, also the lack of establishing shots makes it hard to follow sometimes

did the voice actress change too? I think the voice in episode 1 was better

[Insanire]

this is almost great, there's a few issues with models twitching around and I think you could've handled the camera better

still fun to watch though, keep at it!

RannitX responds:

Thanks for the support and I agree there is definitely room for improvement. Hope you had a great madness day.

[The Blightress]

Liked the first half more than the second, I feel the voice acting was unnneceesary (we could tell what The Blightress was feeling from her body language) as was the use of music. I feel these two things really dragged down the atmosphere you had going. A lot of the animation would have looked better on ones instead of the twos and threes you have it on

overall great stuff though

[1930s walk cycle]

could be better with more inbetweens

[Ping Pong Collab 2]

yep, this one's going into the kino playlist

[Goku Vs. Deku]

animation is good, actual illustration isn't. Learn anatomy and gesture

would rate higher but only 8 seconds worth of video

[Club 1]

I like the creativety with the walks about 33 seconds in

animation quality is pretty good, timing, spacing, squash and stretch are all alright

actual illustration quality could be improved, look into figure drawing

also some audio would be nice

edit: it looks like you're trying to be a successful porn artist, learn figure drawing, I would reccomend Glenn Vilppu's figure drawing course, it's behind a paywall but you can find it for free if you know where to look, use references wherever possible and be creative

[Leisurely Bagtime]

movements have a nice weight to them, violence is visceral and cathartic, and you even managed to suprise me halfway through

FloppyFins responds:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I do my best to keep viewers on their toes

[big ol' mouth]

cool concept, really trippy, fells like I'm watching someone's dream