MetalSlayer69's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Definitely One Adult (spooky)]

funny

[Excited Patience]

not bad keyframe positioning, you need better anatomy skills though, try Figure Design and Invention by Michael Hampton

[Geometric attack]

really smooth and cool, how did you do the frames where the clay is in the air?

PencilKiller responds:

Well, I took a picture of a blank frame first, then rested the clay on something supporting it (eg: a pillar of clay). Then I edited the pillar out in post production to get the clay seemingly fly in the air

[Seinfeld II]

nice to see internet humour hasn't changed much in 18 years

[Interface | Episode 24 Finale]

I don't know what the fuck's going on but these shots look cool as heck, I guess that's just good composition (or ripping off classical art lol jk)

can't wait to see what stories you tell in the future, (hopefully with less pretentious dialogue, but don't let me impede on your creativity)

[Pizza Girl After Hours // Max Hustle]

missing the energy of the first episode, also the lack of establishing shots makes it hard to follow sometimes

did the voice actress change too? I think the voice in episode 1 was better

[Insanire]

this is almost great, there's a few issues with models twitching around and I think you could've handled the camera better

still fun to watch though, keep at it!

RannitX responds:

Thanks for the support and I agree there is definitely room for improvement. Hope you had a great madness day.

[The Blightress]

Liked the first half more than the second, I feel the voice acting was unnneceesary (we could tell what The Blightress was feeling from her body language) as was the use of music. I feel these two things really dragged down the atmosphere you had going. A lot of the animation would have looked better on ones instead of the twos and threes you have it on

overall great stuff though

[1930s walk cycle]

could be better with more inbetweens

[Ping Pong Collab 2]

yep, this one's going into the kino playlist