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2023-02-06 00:10:14

there's often only one character shown at a time, which makes it hard to remember how many characters are in the scene, and sometimes makes conversations harder to follow than they should be

I thought the girl with blue hair was a boy, seeing as you drew all the girls with fucking massive badoinkadoinks. The character designs in general are all too similar to eachother

I liked the bit where blue hair girl explodes the littering guy in the ocean, overall I like the visual jokes a lot more than the dialogue ones, I also like shaking the blood off at 12:14, and most of the other visual jokes I can't be fucked finding the timestamps

the animation is pretty limited, I get that the show (or at least this episode) is carried by its writing, but still, having the characters change expression more (like at 4:57) would be better. Even better would be having the characters change expressions and move their facial features around more while talking, which would allow you to place more emphasis on certain words

I like the background jokes, such as the impaled guy at 3:19

the pacing and structure of this episode is kinda weird, I didn't know it was meant to be a magical girl parody thing until blue hair girl started throwing out fireballs. I also don't get the part at the start with the woman arguing about having her dog on the beach. Like it doesn't really work into the larger episode where the main conflict is the guy in the mech suit. If she came back later in the episode in some way she would at least serve some purpose. Same sort fo thing with the mob of communists, they just get nuked and that's it, then the cops show up, then they fuck off, there's a lot of shit that happens but doesn't contribute to anything. I imagine this problem is probably worse in the 51 min extended version, I might watch that if I'm drunk or high or something

my overall criticism is that the jokes are funny, but not frequent enough, the character animation could be way better, and too much shit that doesn't contribute to the plot makes the runtime way longer than it really needs to be

PS you're allowed to draw tits on newgrounds

TheMiamiDeSantos responds:

yo, yeah, it's one of the experimental features i did talk about, it's one of the gimmicks the episodes being very long (kinda like naruto having a lot of fillers and 5 minutes on dragon ball being very long), but it's surely not giving good results (at least on those first months of my career) i will be aiming for shorter and more animated episodes like the super trouble 7 min ep.
I surely gotta improve the writing, less of mindless stuff and more interesting visual features

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