MetalSlayer69's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Heart of Perseverance]

this isn't animation, it's storyboards, and not even good ones at that, everything is symbol drawn and it's obvious there's no construction used

JaxhousQ responds:

Ummm? Wasn't it obvious it wasn't animation? I never at any point called it that... Otherwise, thanks for your feedback! I'll try to do better in the next one!

[Geometric attack]

really smooth and cool, how did you do the frames where the clay is in the air?

PencilKiller responds:

Well, I took a picture of a blank frame first, then rested the clay on something supporting it (eg: a pillar of clay). Then I edited the pillar out in post production to get the clay seemingly fly in the air

[Insanire]

this is almost great, there's a few issues with models twitching around and I think you could've handled the camera better

still fun to watch though, keep at it!

RannitX responds:

Thanks for the support and I agree there is definitely room for improvement. Hope you had a great madness day.

[Leisurely Bagtime]

movements have a nice weight to them, violence is visceral and cathartic, and you even managed to suprise me halfway through

FloppyFins responds:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I do my best to keep viewers on their toes

[Ribbon-Chan and Red-Kun: Poggers]

I cry everytiem

YamiKurutto responds:

;-;

[Madness 7 but it's an old cartoon (SEIZURE WARNING)]

humour and concept are great, though the filter you put over the animation is too intrusive I feel.
Also you could've done better with timing some of the movements. And you could have used squash and stretch more effectively, an example is demon tricky hitting the wall, where the squash isn't as exaggerated as it should be.

BigVinnieBoe responds:

Thank you a lot! You are the first one to ACTUALLY give some critisim lol, I'll try to improve my other works.

[HURRY! HE WENT THAT WAY!]

aniamtion's pretty decent when you actually use it, but too much of this movie is low quality, like no mouth movements on the goblin. Or only 2 alternating frames on the dude breathing heavily

Kill3rman88 responds:

You’re right! I definitely could’ve put in more work for the majority of the dialogue. I do need to practice lip syncing but I figured for the sake of actually finishing a project I would just do what seemed manageable to me. I appreciate you taking the time to watch it though. Thank you.

[Shrigma Male Dies]

he was a fun guy

ZeusDahGoose responds:

I had to expect this response but God Dammit I was hoping no one would

[Back Talk]

my only complaint is I wish it was longer

AppleJellis responds:

I'm working on making my vids longer but I'm just super busy all the time, but don't worry I'll figure it out one day :)