MetalSlayer69's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness 7 but it's an old cartoon (SEIZURE WARNING)]

humour and concept are great, though the filter you put over the animation is too intrusive I feel.
Also you could've done better with timing some of the movements. And you could have used squash and stretch more effectively, an example is demon tricky hitting the wall, where the squash isn't as exaggerated as it should be.

BigVinnieBoe responds:

Thank you a lot! You are the first one to ACTUALLY give some critisim lol, I'll try to improve my other works.

[HURRY! HE WENT THAT WAY!]

aniamtion's pretty decent when you actually use it, but too much of this movie is low quality, like no mouth movements on the goblin. Or only 2 alternating frames on the dude breathing heavily

Kill3rman88 responds:

You’re right! I definitely could’ve put in more work for the majority of the dialogue. I do need to practice lip syncing but I figured for the sake of actually finishing a project I would just do what seemed manageable to me. I appreciate you taking the time to watch it though. Thank you.

[Shrigma Male Dies]

he was a fun guy

ZeusDahGoose responds:

I had to expect this response but God Dammit I was hoping no one would

[Back Talk]

my only complaint is I wish it was longer

AppleJellis responds:

I'm working on making my vids longer but I'm just super busy all the time, but don't worry I'll figure it out one day :)

[N1B1]

extremely stiff animation, a lot of movements should accelerate as they begin moving, then de-accelarate as they come to a stop

NikoBal responds:

Okay :)

[Doom Guy's French Fries]

pretty boring to watch, I assume you were going for a surrealist comedy, but nothing really funny happens, Doomguy walking into a new location, gunning down imps then repeating isn't interesting or entertaining

Vidyabatter responds:

I didn't really have much to work with, there's not many doom models in 3dmm. just doomguy, imp, and a cyberdemon. that was all i could work with.

[February 2021 Animations Comp]

you have some wack momentum on a few movements, sometimes things should accelerate/de-accelarate while you have them going at a constant speed, the dummy moving through the air in the frog animation as an example.

Anyway, very nice stuff otherwise

Broltaire responds:

Always appreciate the feedback! I too have definitely felt that some of the movements and accelerations were a little off (probably due to me limiting myself to one night to crank these out) Doing these consistently for a couple months now, I should be able to keep a better eye out for it!

[Family Guy "Luck of the Half Irish Part 5]

jokes are well written, voice acting is alright, animation is not that good

TheDanimator responds:

Thank you for watching!

[Godzilla Strikes]

managed to be chaotic while still easy to follow, drawings could be better, sound effects would be nice. You're very good at explosions

oddballanimations responds:

thanks man